Waz up people! I am a wanna be rapper from Zambia. Please, I will post some lines and tell me if der good or not...I really need ur help! Wish me luck!
I am so FLY, i'm on every tight Sh*t
Just like a pregnant woman is the way that I spit
You think you're phly but you's a joke,
and in a MARATHON is the only time you'll RUN NEWYORK.
Just a few lines guys...okay, maybe another one.
You are not an EGG so you're never getting laid,
n I am BAKING all these rappers so i'm never lacking BREAD!
HELP! HELP! HELP!
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Posted 28 September 2008 - 06:23 PM
basic start to developing punchlines. not bad. Plz check your mail. i'll send you some helpful ish.
WRECKADAMUS aka FRED OYONYSC 2007 RAP HEAVYWEIGHT CHAMP.
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