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[Twenty6]

Waz up people! I am a wanna be rapper from Zambia. Please, I will post some lines and tell me if der good or not...I really need ur help! Wish me luck!

I am so FLY, i'm on every tight Sh*t
Just like a pregnant woman is the way that I spit
You think you're phly but you's a joke,
and in a MARATHON is the only time you'll RUN NEWYORK.

Just a few lines guys...okay, maybe another one.

You are not an EGG so you're never getting laid,
n I am BAKING all these rappers so i'm never lacking BREAD!

[thehost]

Welcome, dope man! which hood do you represent? Yeah i see potential, possibly a battle rapper...could be a punchline king....okay i like but im concerned with a few of the words that you rhymed...how long have you been spitting?

[Twenty6]

Thanks dude...not long-only been spittin' for a few months. Still tryna get hold of the hiphop tongue...Reppin' Lsk, Dallas City(Kabwata)

[thehost]

Keep doing your thing, work hard, hustle hard!