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[Couzifer]

TReasure
Ok here goes
So i hear competition raising heads again?
Ghandi? hw he a beast when he's raisin-fed - a lame
This aint India, so how he STeak (stake) his claim?
Since i cant meet him in person, guess id have to BBQ his name
U feel the cook out?down in his marrows i have him Shaking(shake-in) the goosebumps shw dis nicca shook out/
Caught him @ his corner, told ghandi to freestyle, he like "hol up, lemme bring my rhyme book out!"
And i admit he the president...the king rooster-of CHicken republic!
got ghandi's wifey,such a slut so determined to see me bust a nut, she dicklickin in public
She BJ my PeePee she told ghandi, how she culdnt wait 2 swallow my seedlings/
N u can have MJ and MiMi on his songs, but he still wouldnt get it Poppin
U dont want Beef- errbody knws Ghandi's Vegeterian (Mohandas Ghandi was a vegeterian!)
put ur blood on a tree, get a red Leaf- Like canadians ( the canadian flag has a red maple leaf)
Even he knws , Treasure a pain in d Ass like a Boil in ur Anus/
His efforts fruitless, like tryn plant seeds in soil from URANUS/
Im d best, u can bet that, i mean it (minute) like 60 seconds/
U a b***h, a hard-time, U in it like 6 erections ( no homo!) lol
Now u gon have 2 leave with d stigma, I rape pussy Like SA old men tryn cure AIDS/
U shitty, matter fact U organic, ur skills Manure made
and since ur nigerian, Id advice u get a GUARDIAN
Cos im a bad vendor, I sell Punches daily
Last word, Treasure cant be touched like a Porcupine, My body;s spiky scaley!

EASY

Mimi= Mariah Carey, MJ= Micheal Jackson, Guardian and Punch are nigerian newspapers!


ghandi
I'm Wicked With The Mic~Appeal, Plus I Smite~To~Kill~
U Couldn't *Stand Half* A Chance If You Had To *Kneel*//
I Write To Build The Hype That's Real~
*Stroking Ten Beats* For *Half* The *Cup* Jus To *Come* 5 Times Like Brazil*//

Cheers Echo, Frowns Fade See Ur Styles Played~
While I *RAISE HEIRS* (hairs) To My Throne Who Leave "*YOUR BROWS RAISED*"//
Stab U WIth A Smile Made, With A File Blade~
**Headphones On My Head**, You'll Be Diggin' The **Sound Waves**//

From Blood Splatters The Grounds Stained~
Act Tough And U Get Axed And Get Found Maimed~
Michael Vick With A Mic Getting This Hound Slain~
*Blame* The *Flame* In Letters "B" "F", The Only time I **Surround Lames**//

See I'm Deeply Rooted* And Your Powers* Aren't Close To Me~
Top Neva Down Hoes Peepin' The Up-hol-ster-y~
Rappers Claim Dealers*, Ace* Couldn't Take A Dose Of Me~
LEAVE **TREASURE** AT THE **BOTTOM OF THE OCEAN**, WHERE HE SUPPOSED TO BE!!

[ghandi]

chickity check niggas!!
Where dude @?

[TReasure]

U already know

...

[bolaji]

ghandi dont just check in ...pm your 16 line verse to couzifer... treasure has already posted his i guess?.

[ghandi]

weird....thought our verses wud be in by now Couzifer :evil: :wink:

[Couzifer]

Ready for votes, remember em' rules below;

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1- All battles must be judged according to the FLOWS,MULTIES,PUNCHES,PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS
2- ALL votes must be EXPLAINED to be approved.votes like Couzifer wins because he came tighter wouldnt be
accepted.
3- first to 5 votes wins
4- tie=no vote
5- 3-0=K.O
6- no show=loss
7- ANYONE VOTING MUST HAV ATLEAST 50 NUMBER OF PREVIOUS POSTS AND MUST BE A REGISTERED
MEMBER OF AHH NOTHING AFTER MARCH 1ST
8- no hate votes,pussy shits and d*ck riding allowed
9-shitting of threads can call for a penalty

Peace.

[bolaji]

CONTENT -treasure
rhymes-ghandi
punchlines- ghandi
wordplay-ghandi
multis-?
metaz-treasure
disses-treasure
opener-ghandi

reason is i think treasure verse a lil longer ghandi was more structured ,short and a lil straight to the point ...my vote goes to ghandi

[iam]

content -treasure
personals-treasure
rhymes-ghandi
punchlines- ghandi
wordplay-ghandi
metaz-treasure
opener-ghandi
multis none
complexity-ghandi
flow-ghandi

ghandi get me vote

[ghandi]

Appreciate the vote guys!! But I jus wanted to point out one thing:

I WORKED HARD AT DEVELOPING THOSE MULTIES, THEY ARE STIRRING AT YOU GUYS IN THE FACE :mrgreen:
EVEN dude had a couple, in the last few lines of his verse!! & Pls mo' explained votes, so i cud build off that!!

*perplexed by AHH voters negligence towards the "simple concept of multie-syllable rhymes", Ghandi slams shut his lap top without even logging off* :twisted: :oops: :shock: :lol:

[Xblaze]

Couzifer said:

ghandi
I'm Wicked With The Mic~Appeal, Plus I Smite~To~Kill~
U Couldn't *Stand Half* A Chance If You Had To *Kneel*//
I Write To Build The Hype That's Real~
*Stroking Ten Beats* For *Half* The *Cup* Jus To *Come* 5 Times Like Brazil*//

Cheers Echo, Frowns Fade See Ur Styles Played~
While I *RAISE HEIRS* (hairs) To My Throne Who Leave "*YOUR BROWS RAISED*"//
Stab U WIth A Smile Made, With A File Blade~
**Headphones On My Head**, You'll Be Diggin' The **Sound Waves**//

From Blood Splatters The Grounds Stained~
Act Tough And U Get Axed And Get Found Maimed~
Michael Vick With A Mic Getting This Hound Slain~
*Blame* The *Flame* In Letters "B" "F", The Only time I **Surround Lames**//

See I'm Deeply Rooted* And Your Powers* Aren't Close To Me~
Top Neva Down Hoes Peepin' The Up-hol-ster-y~
Rappers Claim Dealers*, Ace* Couldn't Take A Dose Of Me~
LEAVE **TREASURE** AT THE **BOTTOM OF THE OCEAN**, WHERE HE SUPPOSED TO BE!!

those look like multies to me holmes, will come back to this, kinda outta time now...

[MC SKILLZ]

a couple of multies really.though some seem forced but they tight though.wud come back n break it down

[XCAPEE]

damn this is a Tourney,if you can't breakdown then don't vote...

Couzifer said:

Ready for votes, remember em' rules below;

Quote

1- All battles must be judged according to the FLOWS,MULTIES,PUNCHES,PERSONALS AND WORDPLAYS
2- ALL votes must be EXPLAINED to be approved.votes like Couzifer wins because he came tighter wouldnt be
accepted.

1

[TReasure]

hmmn *snaps his toothpick* looks like i didnt eat ghandi afterall lol
will catch him later

[Xblaze]

FLOW: ghandi
META4S: treasure
PUNCHES: treasure
PERSONALS: treasure
MUTLIES: ghandi
COMPLEXITY: treasure
WORDPLAY: ghandi

VOTE: treasure


i hope the voters read the verses.
nice battle holmes

[mimic truce]

TReasure
Ok here goes
So i hear competition raising heads again? LOL
Ghandi? hw he a beast when he's raisin-fed - a lame guess first lines says it all, lol
This aint India, so how he STeak (stake) his claim? think again, its off
Since i cant meet him in person, guess id have to BBQ his name ...
U feel the cook out?down in his marrows i have him Shaking(shake-in) the goosebumps shw dis nicca shook out/yap...
Caught him @ his corner, told ghandi to freestyle, he like "hol up, lemme bring my rhyme book out!"...yap...i dont believe it was that easy to write this, n e how dont like the strength in the punch
And i admit he the president...the king rooster-of CHicken republic!
got ghandi's wifey,such a slut so determined to see me bust a nut, she dicklickin in public lol. ill shit
She BJ my PeePee she told ghandi, how she culdnt wait 2 swallow my seedlings/
N u can have MJ and MiMi on his songs, but he still wouldnt get it Poppin damn
U dont want Beef- errbody knws Ghandi's Vegeterian (Mohandas Ghandi was a vegeterian!)
put ur blood on a tree, get a red Leaf- Like canadians ( the canadian flag has a red maple leaf) whoa
Even he knws , Treasure a pain in d Ass like a Boil in ur Anus/
His efforts fruitless, like tryn plant seeds in soil from URANUS/ filler/whak/not funny/not fruitful
Im d best, u can bet that, i mean it (minute) like 60 seconds/
U a b***h, a hard-time, U in it like 6 erections ( no homo!) lol man check again
Now u gon have 2 leave with d stigma, I rape pussy Like SA old men tryn cure AIDS/
U shitty, matter fact U organic, ur skills Manure made this political. ill
and since ur nigerian, Id advice u get a GUARDIAN
Cos im a bad vendor, I sell Punches daily
Last word, Treasure cant be touched like a Porcupine, My body;s spiky scaley! you worked hard on your verse. but need to get more personal. its all i hav to say



[u]ghandi[/u]
I'm Wicked With The Mic~Appeal, Plus I Smite~To~Kill~
U Couldn't *Stand Half* A Chance If You Had To *Kneel*// imagine dat. ill
I Write To Build The Hype That's Real~
*Stroking Ten Beats* For *Half* The *Cup* Jus To *Come* 5 Times Like Brazil*// ok. this mediocre but sounds creative. cant critiq it much
[i] this cat got ill multies though. its a nice read through
Cheers Echo, Frowns Fade See Ur Styles Played~
While I *RAISE HEIRS* (hairs) To My Throne Who Leave "*YOUR BROWS RAISED*"//talk about down talking cats. saying his fans better than you.lol. dope rhyme too
Stab U WIth A Smile Made, With A File Blade~
**Headphones On My Head**, You'll Be Diggin' The **Sound Waves**//dont know about this.is he reading your mind?.lol

From Blood Splatters The Grounds Stained~
Act Tough And U Get Axed And Get Found Maimed~ i like this cos ghandi dont even put himself in the picture and it sounds so ill
Michael Vick With A Mic Getting This Hound Slain~
*Blame* The *Flame* In Letters "B" "F", The Only time I **Surround Lames**// dont get it, but i think my vote is obvious. i liked reading this. was good.

vote: Ghandi

See I'm Deeply Rooted* And Your Powers* Aren't Close To Me~
Top Neva Down Hoes Peepin' The Up-hol-ster-y~
Rappers Claim Dealers*, Ace* Couldn't Take A Dose Of Me~
LEAVE **TREASURE** AT THE **BOTTOM OF THE OCEAN**, WHERE HE SUPPOSED TO BE!![/quote]