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#1 Couzifer

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 05:32 PM

vision bridges images into my mind
translating them to thoughts,
in my brain slowly growing to wisdom
which in time evolves to creativity

consciousness bridges actions to my body
controlling the muscles,
in my limbs producing movements,
of the hand holding the pen

writting bridges my creativity to the pad
socking it with wisdom,
which through vision
transmits thoughts into the readers brain
creating images in their minds
Fuck wit' me n' I'ma break u' skull, expose u' brains to reality/
jus' to make u' think outside that box u' call a head/

* I don't only think ahead, but ma' thoughts surpass those of a single head * |Couzifer|

#2 XCAPEE

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Posted 02 March 2008 - 06:09 PM

nice piece couz...2 thumbs up

keep it up
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#3 Enigma

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Posted 02 March 2008 - 10:06 PM

mad smooth transmissions from yours to my mind.... :wink:
Hold Up, Big Fish in a little pond
swimming round town thinking like we're already stars
and they say that money change you
but money dont change u
its just makes u more of what u already are....
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#4 Couzifer

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Posted 03 March 2008 - 07:09 AM

Thanks XCAPEE n' Enigma for tha' feeds.
Fuck wit' me n' I'ma break u' skull, expose u' brains to reality/
jus' to make u' think outside that box u' call a head/

* I don't only think ahead, but ma' thoughts surpass those of a single head * |Couzifer|

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Posted 13 March 2008 - 09:26 PM

The pen is mightier than the sword.
Creative economists in the World Bank use structural adjustment policies to starve the poor to death -- They no longer use guns, germs and steel.
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#6 wreck-a-damus

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Posted 15 March 2008 - 01:21 PM

Enigma said:

mad smooth transmissions from yours to my mind.... :wink:
Transitions? U meant. Word-class Flow!
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#7 Couzifer

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Posted 09 May 2008 - 10:38 AM

Thanks Mdaave for u follow up, and wreck for u' feedback.
Fuck wit' me n' I'ma break u' skull, expose u' brains to reality/
jus' to make u' think outside that box u' call a head/

* I don't only think ahead, but ma' thoughts surpass those of a single head * |Couzifer|

#8 eizzy.k

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Posted 12 May 2008 - 10:05 AM

the connection of words through poetry, 4rm u 2 me!
I like, real smooth flow, structured n simple...layin it down how it is!
Much Respect Professor!
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A constant energy,
An ever-changing entity ,
Like the wind blowing
I remain free flowing,
on a journey of self discovery,
myself i hope to find...
"as my ciper keeps rolling like a rolling stone"

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#9 AddictiveSoul

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Posted 12 May 2008 - 01:54 PM

The way you've phrased the chain re-action is lovely.. Makes our senses sound that much more magical, and I couldn't be more grateful.

NiceOne

bless

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