eljodi vs kizito (Ready for votes)

one round, 16 lines, 3votes, shuld do. well here it goes.

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    edited August 2009
    kick a verse kick a verse kick a verse sixteen, kick a verse thats polite and a verse thats mean, you little prick thinks its the best way out, cant read the sign exit, the way out is my mouth, so listen kizzy go change your name to lizzy, cuz i might live you stung like a new bee(newbie) ,i got more action than a verb, the dictonary came asking me for new words, if you want some amo render,eljodi i'll be the battle ryhme bender, nobody's offender, we only got two but am the fourth gender, you can be the third if you got ish to render, try not to waste time like a clock without batterys, this is just a pistol you shuld come with an artillery,you say you down to earth go mingle with the worms, this battle is like you taking a wrong turn..
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    edited August 2009
    categoryz vote, first 3 wins
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited August 2009
    well a call out would have been polite..

    i been idol for a while now so ya.. i'll jump on it..

    thats my check... will post either later today or... early tommorow..

    i hope
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited August 2009
    El.. do u vote? put up ur link.. please!! also.. if u may.. revise ur verse...

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  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited January 2010
    I'm hotter than hell, probly/

    we beefing you brought brokly/

    MC is to AHH so is Losing to L jodi/

    Kick 16 i dont need to, i do 8 & still eat you/

    my bars so rich, u'll eat ths & shit crystals/

    f*k it? wats that a meta4? clock without batteries?/jeez :oops:

    how abt ur rhythms lifeless like ur heart is witout arteries/

    u already f*ked up saying fuck you wud be adultery!!/

    i kept forgeting to hit back.. so i just freestyled this 8 bar.. to get it done with.
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited August 2010
    nice one brof,, lets see 4d votes though its obvious who won
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited September 2010
    [quote name="eljodi"] so listen kizzy go change your name to lizzy, cuz i might live you stung like a new bee(newbie) .[/quote]

    humorous diss!

    okay

    eljodi rhyme

    el similes

    [quote name="el"] you can be the third if you got ish to render, try not to waste time like a clock without batterys & this battle is like you taking a wrong turn..[/quote]

    el metaphores

    [quote name="el"]you say you down to earth go mingle with the worms[/quote]

    non wordplay

    kizito aggression

    the whole verse was directed to el (nice)

    overal el....(CLOSE ONE THOUGH)
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited September 2010
    I would definitely have to say Kizito took this on most if not all cats. Eljodi's structure made it hard to even know where a line began & ended.
    you little prick thinks its the best way out, cant read the sign exit, the way out is my mouth
    no homo?

    This woulda been a set up for a dope flip, i'm just saying.

    but final vote: Kizito
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited September 2010
    Vote ---> Kizito.

    Eljodis' drop is mediocre at best, more nursery rhyme than battle. There is no flow, disjointed, non-direct. You can do better!

    Kizito ... well, lines 2, 4, and 5 have a familiar ring to them ... but I guess it's hard to be "totally" original these days. Otherwise it's pretty simple beatdown!!
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited September 2010
    men definitely a new bee verse,, its a lyk a year old.. yall vote n get it over with dis shit has been to long....
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited October 2010
    vote for vindictive-o 1st. lets move to the next one. :P

    close the votes to make way for new ones.
  • Vote Up0Vote Down
    edited April 2011
    Agreed! Voting done i took this topic locked!
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