the murk a man cipher-3 bars

diss freestyles.. 3 bars

im not the best at this so.. lets kick it and practice

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    edited March 2009
    dude i will open with this but i will counter from ya spit, cause i was skeptical over what to spit(i mean you set it up, so you have the concept)

    here goes!

    i spit flows that force you to rewind/ have you looking behind/

    like a retard/

    thats why a victory against me you can never archieve/

    am iller than any verse you can ever concieve/

    more deadly than any desease you can ever percieve/

    so who is it you're tryin to decieve/

    i spit poems that go across the penisula/

    rhymes are spectacular/like a pyramid made rectangula/

    dialog skills possess the bueaty of queen cleopatra/

    i will leave in disarray and ruins like the city of alexandria/

    am the powerhouse of this rap game like a mitochodria/

    so dont compair me to any of your regular emmcees/

    i leave battered and bruised like a mouse denied of his cheese/

    you african hiphop critics and playa haters will never succed/

    i will bring a state of anarchy till you internally bleed/

    you will plead for breath like a suffocated man led to his death/

    my approach is all minatory/cutting off your atteries/

    intoxicating your body with chemicals from batteries/
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    edited March 2009
    yea man thats the idea... too many bars though... make em 3... 6 lines

    now let me try!

    I abruptly stop your flow like Moses parting the sea/

    then have u in mountains 40 days whilst learning laws of emcees/

    rule one, i am extrodinary and am above what you see/

    thou shalt not live to see the day that ur poetry crosses me/

    my flow makes u retract like a rubber emcee/

    then i bring heat that makes u think the suns related to me/
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    edited March 2009
    still on point as ever kizito i see! the Moses part bra!!!

    well this is ma 3 bars...

    brother you too soft like a kid with them rickets/

    if hip-hop were bails,it would already been knocked-out straight,

    coz you that bats-man who cant protect his wickets/

    im a type of cat who already done did deals with the devil/

    two-tymed the son of the night and smacked him with the bible/

    i take charge,in this game im in charge,im recharged/

    lines got more shocks than nike-shox/
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    edited March 2009
    sorry fam, had to delete ma shit, cause i intend to spit it. am sure you understand, dont want to make the flow a public issue.word
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    edited March 2009
    dudes am sorry i seem to exceed the barz limit every time ,but lets stretch this thread and see how far it can go.
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    edited March 2009
    by the way what ever happened to mr breakinnews! dude you quiet, have you run ont of news?
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    edited March 2009
    U must be in need of your fam coz this are your last days/

    that amo show you a nine and make you wonder your days/

    lyrical head shooter show you what my lines do/

    ufck with me,they carry you to your own tomb/

    im gorry and black,got more slays than a reaper/

    you cant catch me im too quick im in need of a silver/
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    edited April 2009
    Im off creative too lately man!

    writer's block Again!
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    edited April 2009
    W.H.O sick?er? Contradictory statement/

    Aint none iller I walk over these cats like they’re pavements/

    You were born to die I’m fast tracking yah destiny/

    I drop so much heat even Lucifer envies-me/

    Where Im from Diva’s short 4 David AHH recruited a Drag-Queen?

    I’m two in one NOW who’s next on yo Tag-Team?
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    edited April 2009
    [quote name="Rus-tla"]W.H.O sick?er? Contradictory statement/ Aint none iller I walk over these cats like they’re pavements/

    You were born to die I’m fast tracking yah destiny/

    I drop so much heat even Lucifer envies-me/

    Where Im from Diva’s short 4 David AHH recruited a Drag-Queen?

    I’m two in one NOW who’s next on yo Tag-Team?[/quote]

    LOL!!!

    that ish is nice rite there
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    edited April 2009
    going after Rustla is not the best of things to do man!! I back! Ms Hill's flow anyday Pre * ur signature! i love the multis in that song!"

    The f*ck, u lack a back up singer otherwise u'r childless destiny/

    i frustrate, i castrate, checking, are u hip hop or just Beyonce?/

    only unreal G.O.A.Ts will f*ck u up so i guess u be the latter/

    i mess with minds my brainstorms explode and leave u with irreplacable splatter/

    im out of this world i rock, u'r stoned, ur high's my low your baby moms my.. no/

    i nailed this free, its Hummered vs Rustla, on comparison he's really low/
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    edited April 2009
    i flow with force and pressure like water in xylem tubes/

    take you to the ground like a tree without roots/

    run through your body and kidnap your soul/

    exfoliate the rap game peeling off wacks like you/

    make you acknowledge ya shame like girls feel after being rapped/

    you're disgraced/your whole image is displaced/kiz kid/

    youre a week seed/fertility is not guaranteed/
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    edited April 2009
    Cornelius u fucked up, ur rap is morning sickness/

    U under estimate and thats ur strongest weakness/

    im beyond M-sea level like Lauryn on a hill/

    u not ill u just think so,like a pussy on the pill/

    Corn born out of scorn angry sex makes fakes/

    rape child, map the wild and bring this lion's beef steaks/
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    edited April 2009
    dude, you touched my parents in ya verse. that shit aint funny!

    i can also drop mama verse but for what? since she aint a part of this
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    edited April 2009
    im sorry about that, didnt mean to offend!On the real.
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    edited April 2009
    you dudes is criss crossed like plaid fencing vests

    on da mic ya last letter will be da Z on ya chest/

    smoke cuban outta da box text's to slitting wrists

    i am da blade or razor a chef with cuban linx

    your wackness can't resist love potion verbal spits

    break ya heart half heartedly spitting collosal hits/
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    edited April 2009
    this is dumb shit...n i dont need the stratascope

    you could brown my palms bitch, with your mouth like lathered soap

    why bother talk??? shove in your tongue,its how your mother broke

    n you got her skulp, from this fat buldged, it couldve had yo father stroke

    fuck a battle ill hang a rope, n tighten the knot....die to the beat.

    this is the world wide web, and you worried about how you fucking dying on the street???

    LMAO
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    edited April 2009
    I tutor your rap, u mimic truth cat needs the transcript/

    U'r action figure rappers that need to train scripts/

    memorise how i hamonised your nose and my fists/

    u ignore ill, and doubt skills like Ray Charles on my text script/

    u a kiss emcee, its like my rectum's got ur spit/

    then u pull back, spit with ur tounge... then "Oh Shit!"/

    Its getting iller in here!!! Q and Mimic are killing it! Nice one dues!
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    edited May 2009
    u dnt wanna see me in tha cipher

    have niggas bitin my flow

    followin me like im the pied pipper

    there is none tighter

    smokin big blunts

    usin hells flame as my lighter

    even satan gotta emit ima lyrikal fighter

    i stay roolin like a biker

    punchlines 4 days

    so kall me a striker
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    edited May 2009
    I'm amazed at how kid's are quick to dare me

    your only called Piru coz u couldn't spell PUREE/

    loose hanger ya mom should have used when was concieved

    u can use it now and poke a socket ya not challenging me

    ya dexterity is missing like ya two front teeth

    so u still SUCK with ya mouth closed plaese believe!!
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    edited May 2009
    Please believe, your death will be easy leaves/

    to light up with the heat that resides on my sleaves/

    you whipped like a slave, you whipped to your cave/

    you whipped in your grave, these AB MCees sissies... watch them behave/

    what sucks? i look at your verse, im pointing its that/

    Though U R.I.P. DIK, i make u hide under that hat/*Kid piru spelled backwards
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    edited September 2009
    yo, I apologize for my whack verses... but mostly cos they lack choruses

    for these cats to recognize ill, id have to flow with flu viruses

    n this is the first time ive seen internet with mute characters

    these dudes saying they absolute battlers...but its no need to wonder why this a Flabbergast to us

    Maybe with for a digital look at DNA tubes we'd realize that

    look homie, I key mine, just to donate to abstract,

    you dudes mostly side tracked, but you might call it a soundtrack

    so i dont waste minutes,

    it takes less to notice your punctuations've un-dressd yo gimmicks

    Yeah your page is the naked truth, n it doesnt take a wisdom tooth to see it.
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    edited September 2009
    So now I saw u smokin weed now u thinkin u dope/ swept by the current at sea now you think you can flow/im the main event , im the star of the show/ like amateurs givin blowjobs ,nigga u suck/ disney channel rappers call em donald duck / to eliminate me you gona need some luck/ but like a train on the road , your lines are so off track/ its so fuckn funny , you epitomise wack/ these dot.com niggas think they dope coz they on the net/ but I tell em fuck u , i still beat u wana bet/
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