write to this

edited August 2010 in Poetry / spoken word
post your pieces to the below picture. Evrone can. Best piece will be decided upon.

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    edited January 2009
    ok!vnorm,am in!
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    edited January 2009
    ^^ k.

    more heads?
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    edited January 2009
    been looking at the pic for a few days now, but still not inspired

    sorry

    i'ma keep trying though haha
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    edited January 2009
    [quote name="Poetic Seraph"]been looking at the pic for a few days now, but still not inspired

    sorry

    i'ma keep trying though haha[/quote] thats unlike u ps.
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    edited January 2009
    [quote name="vnorm"]^^ k.

    more heads?[/quote]
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    edited January 2009
    I know brooks :shock: :| dunno what's up with that, but i keep tryin :)
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    edited February 2009
    POWERLESS, CONTAGIOUS, OVERWHELMING ANTICIPATION !!!
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    edited March 2009
    well, drop somethin boy. i had it too long i even lost ma inspiration. probably you could gimm some. u may make it a battle if you wanna.
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    edited March 2009
    well, drop somethin boy. i had it too long i even lost ma inspiration. probably you could gimm some.
    OK....

    gimmie 1 day
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    edited March 2009
    lol @ vnorm
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    edited March 2009
    " A WOMANS LOVE FEAR"

    The belief is that I'd also benefit..So I've decided to let U win

    U proved to me U wouldn't quit..So I gave up & gave in

    U handled me with time & care..And U've won me with Ur charm

    How Ur courage confronts any who dares..Has kept me feeling safe from harm

    I'm fixated with how U move..& it hurts when Ur distant

    Ur subtle words r more than smooth..& the feel of Ur voice is instant

    U know I've been crushed before..Sorry I've been so Hard

    Ur time invested I can no longer ignore..Don't make me regret lowering my gaurd

    Now some men lie, deceive and gone in the morning..I've heard this is what some men do

    So it's only fair I give U a warning..Of exactly what Ur getting Ur self into

    The deal is my LOVE is forever..Not just for U to borrow

    And who U've shown me U R was clever..If this is not who U'll be tomorrow

    My biggest FEAR is that for U the thrill..Is in the challenge & the chase

    And once I'm Urs, my soul U'll kill..By exposing a second face

    Much time has gone & now the time has come..U've made me ready to take a chance

    No more in my like can I continue to run..from possible genuine romance

    As long as our LOVE is never torn..In life we will forever be rich

    Just know Hell has no fury like a woman scorn..And payback is a Bitch!!
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    edited March 2009
    lil sumtin, sumtin 8)
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    edited March 2009
    WELL DAMN!!
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    edited March 2009
    a lil sum-sum he says

    DAAAYUUUUM!!!! now ur poem makes that picture mean sooo much more, dayum dayum dayum that's all i got to say hahaha
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    edited March 2009
    my luv is battle but thanks & nuff respect :)
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    edited April 2009
    [quote name="IDEALIST"]my luv is battle but thanks & nuff respect :)[/quote]

    we can do this? p.m me.
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    edited April 2009
    [quote name="vnorm"]
    [quote name="IDEALIST"]my luv is battle but thanks & nuff respect :)[/quote]

    we can do this? p.m me.[/quote]*sniff sniff*... I smell a battle!...*sniff sniff*
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    edited April 2009
    hey. i tried a storyline too. check it out.

    verse

    i fallen....

    eyes closed....

    mind lost, n freed,

    fearless of what this time choose

    in my mind inside all what my eyes saw

    "stay here" and in my heart more

    if i shed a tear, will you wipe my eyes slow

    theres charm in your guise, is that what this sign shows

    pleassurable time, all this is worth a try, tell me its not false

    "i know...i know....i know"

    sweet rose, scented on your silk clothes

    i feel more weakened loose balance off my big toes

    this.... is close

    nothing could tear us apart...despite what doubt... that... indeed grows

    then shatters with another touch, addict to this deep pulse of impulse

    love feverish lust, i trust him, feel his needs clutch

    heart, beating, warmth, his breath bowled on my neck, hair in sling pose

    just to buy a second n restrain myself from your lovely dimples

    weak n lost...words building, wondering if i indeed spoke

    would spoil the moment...his voice sulky, love it when he sweet talks

    i fallen....feelings i hold now in this thick rose

    to bloom and remind me of things i should remember, what i believed most.

    Love is a mystery, and he is such a sweet ghost. " I love you Steve"
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    edited April 2009
    we can do this? p.m me.
    alright
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    edited April 2009
    vote IDEA.

    LOL. no wait. is that a dick vote?

    ill come see this battle later.

    may the best man win.
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    edited April 2009
    nice drops both of you! i tot i was suppose to be in this 1?

    vnorm where u at?
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    edited April 2009
    i tot i was suppose to be in this 1?
    can't u still drop brooks?

    good piece mimic 8)
    vnorm where u at?
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    edited April 2009
    Dope idea...

    Guess i'm a little late...did the battle ever happen? hmm...

    How about a new picture??

    [attachment=0]urban domestic girl.jpg[/attachment]

    Y'all know the rules...Write to this!
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    edited April 2009
    SHORT POINT

    Greens, Jeans, G-Strings and Wine

    Without even tring ..u classy,sexy and fine

    Ur the complete package..one of a kind

    Every time u enter a room..u shine

    Who ever can't see that ..must be blind

    I want to walk over and hold u from behind

    But I sit here at the kitchen table still amazed Ur mine

    I can't think of any other place I'd rather be at this time

    My Baby!!
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    edited April 2009
    Baby Bay-be!

    :wink:

    Hot...thanks 4 coming throu idealist, will feed on dis a lil later...been busy cookin greens, drinkin wine in my G-string! LoL!
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    edited April 2009
    nice new picture eizzy k. will post sooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn. by the way, that girls as is big! :D
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    edited May 2009
    im back. sorry folks, sorry.
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    edited May 2009
    SHORT POINT

    Greens, Jeans, G-Strings and Wine

    Without even tring ..u classy,sexy and fine

    Ur the complete package..one of a kind

    Every time u enter a room..u shine

    Who ever can't see that ..must be blind

    I want to walk over and hold u from behind

    But I sit here at the kitchen table still amazed Ur mine

    I can't think of any other place I'd rather be at this time

    My Baby!!
    Baby I know u think my ass is fine

    And u wanna be touching it all the time

    But if u keep playing with my g-string

    This cooking gonna turn into a sexual thing

    The greens are already burning

    So control your yearning

    We’ll have dinner on this table first

    And after we cleaned up

    These legs will spread open

    And I’ll be your desert

    :twisted:
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    edited May 2009

    [quote]SHORT POINT

    Greens, Jeans, G-Strings and Wine

    Without even tring ..u classy,sexy and fine

    Ur the complete package..one of a kind

    Every time u enter a room..u shine

    Who ever can't see that ..must be blind

    I want to walk over and hold u from behind

    But I sit here at the kitchen table still amazed Ur mine

    I can't think of any other place I'd rather be at this time

    My Baby!!
    Baby I know u think my ass is fine

    And u wanna be touching it all the time

    But if u keep playing with my g-string

    This cooking gonna turn into a sexual thing

    The greens are already burning

    So control your yearning

    We’ll have dinner on this table first

    And after we cleaned up

    These legs will spread open

    And I’ll be your desert

    :twisted:[/quote]

    Now Girl U can feel I love Ur Flow

    and pleasing U is my only task

    and I feel U've got much more soul

    than any woman has

    I'm not sure baby if U know

    but RIGHT NOW I want that ass

    so turn the fire down real low

    and I promise the greens will last

    Ur dessert will have be the 1st to go

    I'm sorry, but dinner will have to pass

    I'll work yo body on the table slow

    before I rock yo body fast

    I know sometimes I can be real cold

    when I'm talking all that trash

    I need U baby to help me grow

    Please teach me how to be that Man!!

    I'M WAITING
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    edited June 2009
    [quote name="Poetic Seraph"]Baby I know u think my ass is fine

    And u wanna be touching it all the time

    But if u keep playing with my g-string

    This cooking gonna turn into a sexual thing

    The greens are already burning

    So control your yearning

    We’ll have dinner on this table first

    And after we cleaned up

    These legs will spread open

    And I’ll be your desert

    Can i have desert b4 the meal?

    i know am hungry< but food isnt a big deal,

    lets go bananas< eating will just be d pilL

    PLUS i dont do pils "injections" is the real deal.

    This cutty with a good booty,

    Cooking sexy food!,

    I do love chicken,

    but giving head is too good, (just kidding :) )

    Your sexual desires is wat am her to satisfy<<br />
    so let me get u real high,

    And all u gotta do babe is let ur thighs stay fly

    BROOKS!
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